Lesson
Six: Editing and Revising
Introduction
"If
one thing could be perfect, it should be the essay." - Admissions
Officer
Writing is
not a one-time act. Writing is a process. Memorable writing
comes more from rewriting than it does from the first draft.
By rewriting you will improve your essay -- guaranteed. If
you skimp on the rewriting process, you significantly reduce
the chances that your essay will be as good as it could be.
Once you
have taken a break from your essay, come back and read it through
one time with a fresh perspective. Analyze it as objectively
as possible based on the following three components: substance,
structure, and interest. Do not worry yet about surface errors
and spelling mistakes; focus instead on the larger issues.
Consider reordering your supporting details, delete irrelevant
sections, and make clear the broader implications of your experiences.
Allow your more important arguments to come to the foreground.
Take points that might only be implicit and make them explicit.
In order
to figure out where revisions are necessary, you are going
to need as many different sets of eyes to read your essay as
possible. Whether it is you or one of your friends, family
members or teachers, these questions will help guide your revision
process.
Select
One:
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Extra: To Title or Not to Title?
Some
essayists decide to add a title to their essay,
although most do not. Titles are definitely not
required, and if you are wondering whether or not
to add one to yours, remember the old adage: when
in doubt, leave it out.
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